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Halleluja Music By Leonard Cohen Lyric Re-Write For Worship Service

Here are Leonard Cohen’s original lyrics:

I’ve heard there was a secret chord
That David played, and it pleased the Lord
But you don’t really care for music, do you?
Well, it goes like this, the fourth, the fifth
The minor fall, the major lift
The baffled king composing Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah

Well, your faith was strong but you needed proof
You saw her bathing on the roof
Her beauty and the moonlight overthrew you
She tied you to a kitchen chair
She broke your throne, she cut your hair
And from your lips she drew the Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah

Well, baby, I’ve been here before.
I’ve seen this room, and I’ve walked this floor.
I used to live alone before I knew you.
But I’ve seen your flag on the marble arch,
And love is not a victory march,
It’s a cold and it is a broken Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah

Well, there was a time when you’d let me know
What’s really going on below,
But now you never show that to me, do you?
But remember when I moved in you,
And the Holy Ghost was moving too,
And every breath we drew was Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah

Well, maybe there is a God above,
But all that I’ve ever learned from love
Was how to shoot somebody who outdrew you.
It’s not a cry that you hear at night,
And it is not somebody who has seen the light
It’s a cold and it is a broken Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelujah

 

What My Thoughts Were…

Well, it’s a lovely song. Super-moving.

But am I going to sing any of these lines at church?

  • You saw her bathing on the roof
  • She tied you to a kitchen chair
    She broke your throne, she cut your hair
  • But all that I’ve ever learned from love
    Was how to shoot somebody who outdrew you.

OK, well, no.

So what’s left to do, but write alternate lyrics for Cohen’s Hallelujah that would be appropriate for worship services?

Nothing, so here goes!

ADDRESSING LEONARD
You wrote some words that resonate
and on my path of rejecting pain
i make some changes to suit
Now I offer all my strengths and gifts
and fearlessly step forth and lift
my heart to the Lord
Halleluia

DO WHAT’S RIGHT VERSE
Regardless of your stage in life
you have a sense of what’s wrong and right
despite what you’re commanded to do
Your orders are to kill or harm
But we refuse to play along
We claim the strength to refuse
Hallelujah

ANY NAME VERSE
regardless of the names we choose
the statues clothes or books we use
we’re shoulder to shoulder in truth
Now remember that it moves in you
And the Holy Ghost, you feel it too
The spirit the nameless that frees us
Hallelujah

TESTAMENT VERSE
Well maybe there’s no God above,
and the only Spirit lives in us,
But we’ve learned the lesson of love
We sing our songs day and night
Our harmony brings love and light
and our world is whole, Hallelujah
Hallelujah

Here’s a rough cut, right after drafting the lyrical re-write…

 

 

Coming Soon…

Please feel free to make comments & suggestions. I plan to make a professional recording soon.

Gratitude to Leonard Cohen’s Soul R.I.P.

I can literally feel Leonard Cohen’s soul with me, next to me, and smiling at me and with me — for doing this re-write. It’s like his soul is cheering me on and offering a kind of warm support.

Enjoy!

 

 

Download Your Copy of the “Kids Safety Song” Here :-)

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Lyrics:

A stranger comes up driving
and offers me a ride
though the reason sounds appealing
here’s my reply

No no no no
someone take out a phone
we’re gonna get a picture of you
I called the police
who protect our peace
now leave me alone!

Seems like a friendly person
I just met online
well it’s a kidnapper’s fake virtual profile asking
do you want to meet in real life?

I showed my dad
I showed my mom
I took a screenshot to my teacher
Thanks to the law
The perpetrator was caught
and the world is a safer place!

I know some kids are trying
drugs sex and other stuff
they want me to join them
and do things that are dangerous

No no no no
you’ve got to go
I only do what’s healthy for me
My life is mine
and yours is yours
and I love me!

I will never bully
or call anybody names
I report anyone who tries it with me
Your least consequence is shame

No no no no
You’ve got to go
Bullying has no place in my life
Powerfully surrounding me
are joy and peace!

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Rock Song: Can’t Run (Video Kickoff For Patreon.com Campaign)

Hey,

I’ve started talking with people about launching a patreon.com campaign, and I figured this song would be a good one to start with:

I’m gathering video clips now, and a few really amazing artists have agreed to have their work shown in the video. If you have a visual contribution that you feel would work well in a video about perseverance and accepting the sometimes painful process growth can require, then please do get in touch.

Here is a video that moved me, and shows the kind of work I will be doing in the future 🙂 Click on the image to hear a soulful and heartfelt cover of “Bright Eyes – First Day Of My Life.”

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Artists, whose work will be included in the video as of January 16th, 2015 are:

Rob Secades

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Vladimir Volegov

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Thank you to everyone who has contributed their time, work, encouragement and support, to make it possible for me to release my work now…

This particular song was written and recorded in the late 90’s and was a part of a collaborative musical project I created. It would be super lovely, if everything “came together,” for a real, official release of the song w a meaningful and appealing video.

Feel free to think through how you may be able to support, encourage, benefit, and/or contribute.

Sincerely,
dainis